From the beginning, the author does a fantastic job of
setting the scene. His descriptions of the world of Tholann are vivid and full
of depth throughout, wasting no time in immersing the reader into this strange
new world.
Likewise, his development of the races on Tholann is
similarly detailed and imaginative; from the towering Jikhquae women, down to
the tiny squirrel-like Rethe, Patrick shows you the planets population in
vibrant detail.
The premise is typical fantasy fare, with a protagonist that
is pushed out of his normal life in order to fulfill a quest that is vital to
the world. The story moves at a steady
pace, with a good mix of dialogue, action, and world-building. I found myself
staying up a few nights to finish an extra chapter or two, which is one of my
hallmarks for a good book, and I finished the whole thing in three days.
This brings me to the only area that left me feeling flat.
This book felt too long to be a short story, but far too short to be the first
book of an epic fantasy series. As the
first in a series, I can appreciate that more will likely be explained in the
subsequent volumes, but several portions felt as if they weren’t fully fleshed
out in this book, such as the different agates and how they are used to
interact with the world around them.
Several of the supporting characters also seemed to be missing some
detail which would have allowed the reader to connect with them more deeply.
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